FATSHARK's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gears Of Madness Act 1-1]

Just Terrible

This seemed to have goten worse since your shorter preview.
The idea is dry as is the animation.... the drawings were terrible.... you should take into account if they are suitable enought to everyone else.
not just you, also the running noise was so annoying, you should take it out, and the chainsaw noise, well, that was to much... it was too loud and pointles as he didnt even cut the "locust" until the end of it....try alot harder and use another site to braodcast your previews until they are finished.... we want finished products not little 5 hours endevours.

Cooliam responds:

thanks alot

[Short madness scene]

Well....

It was ok, the feet seemed to be out of control there and it appears you left the background on at the end, you should of deleted the last few pointless frames....

hankness responds:

did you have to give ma a 4 for that!?

[madness:uberification]

Hmm....

One star for trying, minus nine stars for trying....
And constructive critisicm?

How about delete it....

Try harder, learn how to animate madness properly, its not just guns and noise.... it takes a long time to get good at it, take a look at ergo-engans tributes, or alpha-nuvas.... practice on flash more and once you think you've finished a project, sit back and watch it thoroughly and think "would i like to watch this?".

If no then keep practicing, if yes and its like your second attempt, your a dumbass.

Realise the standard. There, constructive enough.

mrflub responds:

as harsh as it is, thats a good review. i have improved and some words always come to my mind whenever i start something. example im always saying to my self would I watch this? so yeah. thanks

[Rats on Cocaine - Ep # 9]

lol surrender

What a great finish.

ApocalypseCartoons responds:

never!

[Madness Forfeit]

Hey there !

See you've finally released your flash lol, from what you showed me a while a go i'de say you've improved greatly, but still have a long way to go ;).

Also i dont think its a good idea if yuo copy parts out of other people flashes as its unoriginal and would most likely get you in some trouble lol, but overall it was ok, could of been better lets hope you try even harder on the next one !!!

Johannesson responds:

yeah.. it sucked i know

[Merry Madness 7 TRAILER]

This has potential

But is far from completion, atleast i hope it is..... yo need to take time out and develop your character making skills better.

I myself have just realised that i can create some rather unique designs lol, if you need some help just ask ;)

adollfo responds:

if I do...i´ll ask u....thanks!

[Nintendo Story ep. 1]

lol

good movie, considering it was rushed. I can see the improvement aswell keep up your great efforts and youll be front paging in no time !

Gustavos responds:

I certainly hope I'm frontpaged at one point. But that's long from now. I'm just gonna make more episodes and see what happens. I simply thought you'd be interested in seeing my talents as of now. This movie was rushed because I needed it out before Brawl which would occupy me for several weeks...and it did.

Thanks!

[Short- Madness Fridge]

lol

Your getting better ;) keep up the good work

newgroundsludde responds:

yeah, thanks.. it was pretty long time we talked

[Madness Combat- The gift]

HMM....

Gotta agree with masubi on this one..... the animation was terrible and the flash wasnt worth our time, try harder please....

maxthefax responds:

hmm, i see some comments say otherwise...