Well....
It was ok, the feet seemed to be out of control there and it appears you left the background on at the end, you should of deleted the last few pointless frames....
Well....
It was ok, the feet seemed to be out of control there and it appears you left the background on at the end, you should of deleted the last few pointless frames....
did you have to give ma a 4 for that!?
Hmm....
One star for trying, minus nine stars for trying....
And constructive critisicm?
How about delete it....
Try harder, learn how to animate madness properly, its not just guns and noise.... it takes a long time to get good at it, take a look at ergo-engans tributes, or alpha-nuvas.... practice on flash more and once you think you've finished a project, sit back and watch it thoroughly and think "would i like to watch this?".
If no then keep practicing, if yes and its like your second attempt, your a dumbass.
Realise the standard. There, constructive enough.
as harsh as it is, thats a good review. i have improved and some words always come to my mind whenever i start something. example im always saying to my self would I watch this? so yeah. thanks
lol surrender
What a great finish.
never!
Hey there !
See you've finally released your flash lol, from what you showed me a while a go i'de say you've improved greatly, but still have a long way to go ;).
Also i dont think its a good idea if yuo copy parts out of other people flashes as its unoriginal and would most likely get you in some trouble lol, but overall it was ok, could of been better lets hope you try even harder on the next one !!!
yeah.. it sucked i know
FUCKING EXCELLENT
THIS IS HUMOUR AT ITS BEST
lol, poo joke....
This has potential
But is far from completion, atleast i hope it is..... yo need to take time out and develop your character making skills better.
I myself have just realised that i can create some rather unique designs lol, if you need some help just ask ;)
if I do...i´ll ask u....thanks!
lol
good movie, considering it was rushed. I can see the improvement aswell keep up your great efforts and youll be front paging in no time !
I certainly hope I'm frontpaged at one point. But that's long from now. I'm just gonna make more episodes and see what happens. I simply thought you'd be interested in seeing my talents as of now. This movie was rushed because I needed it out before Brawl which would occupy me for several weeks...and it did.
Thanks!
lol
Your getting better ;) keep up the good work
yeah, thanks.. it was pretty long time we talked
that was really really good !
Great artwork, and the story is on its way to greatness i just know it ! keep it up for the next one !
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