You should practice alot more
These appear to be getting worse eachtime you post....
I was kind of lost in what was going on it all seemed to be a large mess of text and random sprites and a cursor.
All i can say is this, you are not ready for madness, you need to practice alot more and learn to feature a bit more quality.
Even though you had a good try, its low quality madness flash like this that are putting people of the series all together.